Categories
thoughts

Criticism


Nice to be reviewed
nicer to be not reviewed
at times meaningless comments
come up and torment
write a poem as it comes
do not bother what next comes
it is your mind that works all along
do not wait for criticism any long.

Categories
Poetry unnshown

The Affirmations and Rejections


Like to view

wish to review

like to ensure

wish to assure

like to deviate

wish to radiate

like to talk

wish to walk

could all these be

could all these not be

wishes and likes increase

never at any time decrease

affirmations and rejections

with no causes or representations

fly high with no follow-up

therein comes a round-up

unexpected and unknown

all such experiences pass unshown.affirmations and rejections

Categories
thoughts

Reviews.


Writing poems for review
has been not my view
Reviews critireviewcise
or appreciate.
Well, they are best
when there rises
a demand compelling
that of understanding the meanings
and relishing the fine tones
if these two are absent
then reviews ensemble
become fundamentally
wrong and discouraging
killing the poetic muse
and quelling the spirit
to a diabolical struggle
making the poet
die a death
most unnatural.