My home is a structure concrete,
Full of vibrations discreet,
Bubbling with lively sprite,
Lying in an exclusive bright.
It looks like a dumb building
But holds within it dainty feeling,
Each door gives out a clue,
Each window opens out to the blue.
It appears as a sullen house,
But has a majestic pose,
As each brick sings a refrain,
While each stone chants a bargain.
It seems a little old,
But emanates a spirit bold,
As each plant waves merrily,
While each tree dances happily.
Quietness is its essence,
Grand is its magnificence,
Inimitable is its form,
Enchanting is its charm.
My home ,sweet home,
I cherish you all the same,
I wish all the more.
To be with you further more.

3 replies on “MY Home”
Hello Madam,
Your lirics are fascinating. I have seen you as the writer of the day on Blogcrtics and have come here.
Your pen is simple but shining. It is simple but deep. It is simple but fresh. It is like a breeze of fresh and pure air. You look like retired but thoughts are so young. I can’t prevent myself going without comment.
You are simply wonderful.
Thank you vijay . it is always lovely to get an appreciation. meenas17 .
There is nothing more precious than home…enjoyed you poem.