Walked out of a crowded train,
Into a still more populated strain,
Edging through the sea of humanity,

Negotiating along the busy insanity,
Made way to the less treaded path ,
Which meandered into a narrow lane,
That led to a sprawling land space,
Much away from the dense base,
Where huge trees bow with grace,
Where lovely hedges greet with love,
Where pretty flowers dance with joy,
While there triggers a sense of peace,
Rejuvenated by a whiff of fresh air.

4 replies on “A Whiff Of Fresh Air”
beautiful image,
well written poem…
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Always worth it to opt for the less treaded path; cool images as well. cheers
I’m one of those folks who hates the pressing of humanity against me…not a good city dweller at all…so you’re finding a space and fresh air strikes a chord with me.