The Comment Unsolicited.


Heard a comment  the day before

one of great value in a suppose

came from a man of great experience

a senior man he is with a critical eye

known for his remarks wholly abusive

never could he see the best in all

searches for the unseen through the veil

points his fingers at the links not thought of

feels he is above all  being  a trace of omnipotence

found too much in his authoritative moves

crosses beyond the  line of his status

being not a boss or a chief  but a subordinate

 

 

 

 

 

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