The garden abounds with fresh vegetables,
Ripe tomatoes sweep the pathway ,
Green chillies hang midway,
Eggplants bloom in purple along the causeway,
Leafy cabbages represent a royalty all the way.
Rains fall in a heavy downpour,
Flooding the garden in an uninterrupted sway,
The lovely vegetables get soaked in a desolate gay,
The earth looks like a marshy tray

Snails big and small move about in the way.
They go about in a pace so slow ,
Coiling and recoiling in a manner so graphic,
Drawing into their hard shells seem so specific,
Over a period they multiply in numeric,
The garden encounters a danger symbolic.
The water recedes gradually ,
The soil happens to look like a slushy muddle,
The vegetables lie rotten in the muddle,
The snails track down the puddle,
The garden appears like an unsolved riddle.

14 replies on “At Last The Snails”
The weather can surely take what was a wonderful garden and ruin it quite quickly.
Very creative. Nicely done!
Thank you.
descriptive and creative piece.
Happy Rally.
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Very catchy and vivid description of nature:))
Yup! The beauty and the Joys are somehow insurmountable to the gardener…dispite the outcome.
Very nice piece.
Ah nature blesses and curses…delightful imagery and so creative
those pesky snails ….but this garden sounds a delight …thank you for a glimpse into an inspiring garden x x
As someone who has spent time on a farm I can appreciate the intricacies of your delightful poem. Well done.
WoW! I enjoyed the description of the garden…Had a full picture of garden with the help of your words..couldn’t stop in the middle ..Lovely graceful poetry ..Thanks for share…
colorfully painted…enjoyed.
Hello.
Where I live, it’s not the snails, but worms that come out in full force when it rains.
Very creative.
Nice imagery too.
Thanks for sharing.
A Weeping Rose
how amazing your poetry is,
this is brilliant,
smiles.
welcome sharing a random piece of your poetry with us today, cheers.
nice mental pictures here of loss.