Nice to be reviewed
nicer to be not reviewed
at times meaningless comments
come up and torment
write a poem as it comes
do not bother what next comes
it is your mind that works all along
do not wait for criticism any long.
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A Puritan He Thinks.
A comment right into the vein
sharp and incisive in a strain
pierces the heart and goes beyond
comes then assuage all in the round
never could reconcile in the same
nor could accept it without a blame
yet he speaks like a puritan in general
in truth, he is a cynic of a way in plural.
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The Comment Unsolicited.
Heard a comment the day before
one of great value in a suppose
came from a man of great experience
a senior man he is with a critical eye
known for his remarks wholly abusive
never could he see the best in all
searches for the unseen through the veil
points his fingers at the links not thought of
feels he is above all being a trace of omnipotence
found too much in his authoritative moves
crosses beyond the line of his status
being not a boss or a chief but a subordinate
Didactic, preachy,
laborious, round about
comes the accusation
not in this platform 
but elsewhere
with reference to my poems
telling a simple thing
with lot of gerunds
and in a round about way
add to the complaint
looking at them felt worried
then brushed aside the criticism
as I feel I write out of passion
write for my satisfaction
not for money or fame
if round about be not to their appeal
let it be so as I continue to write
I am happy for whatever it is
let that be the end.
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The Dashboard
Dashing through the board
I hit upon the dashboard
which has a record of mine
that being my posts in a twine
all that be the views for the day
the comments in a way
all in one form and design
that has been great and dwarf
with that of my counterparts
who do shine far more superior
greater in their popularity
and greatest in their reach
I see them with wide open eyes
as the dashboard tells them
with a statistics and graph
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hat has been a straight hit
that takes me by bit
and prompts me to rummage through
with a reinforced gusto all over.
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Comment Inauspicious.
Every other thing passed unnoticed
except the one very insignificant
that of a remark slight and immaterial.
The place where it was said took the arterial
while the way it was spelt looked indecent
The comment became inauspicious most recent
as it went through many voices in turn
taking an innocuous trend and burnt.
Words once uttered become not ours
but take the identity of the course
releasing a morbidity and disaster
making the receiver wreath in pain thereafter.
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There You Are.
Seeing what is there
commenting about it
without any extra details
describing as it is
making nothing more of it
tells you are prosaic.
Seeing what is there
adding imagination to it
coloring it beautifully
allowing it to take wings
making the most of it
emphasizes you as a poet.
Seeing what is there
enjoying it for itself
loving it more and more
depicting it with gesticulations
making it an experience
finds you as a dramatist.
The three perceptions
basically tell the same
but one with a reality
another an exaggeration 
and the last one an entertainment
all that pointing to the very same
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