Comment Inauspicious.

Atrocious comment pierce the heart.

inauspicious comment.Every other thing passed unnoticed

except the one  very insignificant

that of a remark slight and  immaterial.

The place where it was said took  the arterial

while the way it was  spelt looked  indecent

The comment became inauspicious most recent

as it went through many voices in turn

taking an innocuous trend  and burnt.

Words once uttered become not ours

but take the identity of the course

releasing a morbidity and disaster

making the receiver wreath  in pain thereafter.

By meenas17

A lover of classical Carnatic music.
An avid reader, passionate writer, into stocks and investments for livelihood

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