Meenas PoemsWell done! very well done!
you have won
said all one by one
sat there she amazed
curiously she gazed
remained there unfazed
she got up straight
stood there bright
said she in a tone right
it is “God who made us
all”.
Not I, nor you, could give a call
if not for Him in all.
The portrayal was interesting
the narration was enlivening
there was a rapt listening
could only hear the breathing
the characterisation was insightful
the speech was wonderful
with the eloquence resourceful
coloured by imagination fanciful
the feel of reality was felt all through
the characters were brought to life in true
with the hero making an entry anew
the villain cutting the edge in a breakthrough
the intermediaries creating a conducive backdrop
the story telling broke the barriers in a split
looking as though the monologue had hit
the technique was never tiring a bit
an ovation came from all sectors
the speaker was one in a thousand
one who holds everyone in spell bound.
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