The writing is strange
the style is stranger
the words are archaic
the structure strangest.
The poem struck me.
I read it again
then again and again
sounded very genuine.
The style as such was different
not very coherent
but seemed to be a melody
rhapsodical and
The words are simple
could be understood easily
they are there with an ease
very cordial and pleasant.
The strangeness I find
both in words and style
add up to the charm
quaint and enlivening.
The poem elicits a grandeur
modelled on a structure
ordinary yet extraordinary
great and celestial.
Strange goes with divine
as it hovers round the unknown
a halo perhaps unseen
6 replies on “The Strange Poem”
when you write strangely, your poem reads unique,
which is a good thing.
Happy Rally.
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overlapped imagery, masterful write.
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it is fun to play strange, stranger, and strangest word game.
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Thanks for your lovely comment.
anything odd could strike and evoke stunning imagery on multiple things.
especially when it comes to poetry writing,.
this is lovely.
beautiful wording.