The edited and modified version,
Jealousy propounds a colour
one of bright yellow
pale it is in the beginning,
turns darker as days pass
reflects an animosity
along with a dislike
confirms a quality of detest
a shade of vengeance
remarkably reticent.
The original,
Jealousy professes colour
high up with the collar
the tinge of the colour
a bright and a light stellar
one with the sunlight
as scorching and bright
a mild hue in the initial
turns darkest in the final
reflects an animosity in large
refracts a dislike on the verge
the colour being one of yellow
does not freely in an allow
expresses the concern if at all
the consideration being one of a fall
a wish of bitterness and sourness
nothing at all of the sweetness.
A comparison of both and a tick for the best.
Meena.
Meenas Poems 
4 replies on “The Jealous Hue.”
Meena I would go with the first version, its brilliant, I love it.
You mean the edited one?
Yes I do mean the edited one.
Thanks. I will go by your suggestion.
I am revising, editing and workshopping on my poems.
I need your help. As I post my workshopped ones with the original, go through them and pick the best.
I would appreciate your willingness to help me. You have already done.
Require assistance and I rely on you and Isabella Simons.She has offered to help.
Thanks again,
Meena.