Hot , hotter and hottest
obsessed I with heat
day by day the heat increases
never does it go down
perspiration, sweat and fatigue
overcomes with a force
thirst, thirst unquenchable thirst
overwhelms in all
unable to appease it
with litres of water and juices
not able to venture out
unable to sit locked in the house
unbearable it becomes all the more
questionable to the sustenance?
how am I to endure the rest of summer
so hot and so cruel being against all norms.
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I am obsessed with heat
it melts me all too quick
I perspire with a sigh
I sweat heavily
I am tired, dead tired.
I am thirsty, damn thirsty
I drink pints of milk and buttermilk
litres of juices and water
never I go near the ice creams
the thirst is unquenchable.
I wish not to venture out
prefer to sit at home
I think of sustenance unrelatedly
the rest of summer stares hard
I am at a loss.