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Experience Or Adventure.


Success takes you off your mind.


Iwatchedt is an experience

you could call it an adventure

happens to me with an intense

may come to you as a venture

what could it be?

you might wonder

it does not demand a fee

I fully surrender

it is not  nocturnal

it is all time

not found in any journal

it would cost you a dime

it is never in your hand

success takes you off your head

you lose yourself  when you see that wand

think you could make impossible to move ahead

could seem very much within the  grasp

all of a sudden, it slips from your hold

the let down would sting you like a wasp

you would  freeze and become cold

have in mind that you are being  watched

you are, after all, a  human

always in the verge of being knocked

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By meenas17

A lover of classical Carnatic music.
An avid reader, passionate writer, into stocks and investments for livelihood

2 replies on “Experience Or Adventure.”

Nice of you to have commented. Thanks.
it is the perspective of each individual..
I did not mean the problems . I wanted to highlight the highhandedness of human behaviour.
Thanks so much.

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