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debate objection Poetry trigger.

I Demand A Rebate.


I wrote a poem very simple

about  the revenue and its source

could, not a cause a ripple

it turned an unexpected resource

mayhem broke loose  extensively

words flew in a rage intensely

a note of genuine  appreciation

brought in  uncalled depreciation

one not able to accept another’s prowess

cried foul  with venom in excess

unwanted remarks came from the one

who fumed and frothed in tons

I stood aghast  for a while

well, that is not my style

put an end to this ugly controversy

warned her  of the consequence

declared my objection in a sense

hope it would put an end to the debate

otherwise, I should demand a rebate.controversy

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A Rhyme Without Time


To the boil

came a foil

in an untold toil

not from the soil

but from the coil

the fire broke out

spread in and out

went up in sprout

it was a rout

with that came out

an expected fall-out

the man stood stout

walked as if he had a gout

had a  big doubt

could not clear it out

so  went back  home.

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That being The Revenue.


That being a revenue

comes not from one venue

pours from different avenues

hard it is to review

harder still to view

Could it be from a fair source?

what could be the resource?

the mind prods and probes

unnecessarily it debates

knowing the revenue is illicit

the restlessness requires no elicit

leave it as a chaff in the threshold

go about with a freehold

as you have lots to do in genuine

and lot more to execute in sanguine

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