debate objection Poetry trigger.

I Demand A Rebate.

Jealous is the word that could be best put across.

I wrote a poem very simple

about  the revenue and its source

could, not a cause a ripple

it turned an unexpected resource

mayhem broke loose  extensively

words flew in a rage intensely

a note of genuine  appreciation

brought in  uncalled depreciation

one not able to accept another’s prowess

cried foul  with venom in excess

unwanted remarks came from the one

who fumed and frothed in tons

I stood aghast  for a while

well, that is not my style

put an end to this ugly controversy

warned her  of the consequence

declared my objection in a sense

hope it would put an end to the debate

otherwise, I should demand a rebate.controversy

By meenas17

A lover of classical Carnatic music.
An avid reader, passionate writer, into stocks and investments for livelihood

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