The Encomium in a Song

Awesome is the word

stuckmeenu Sydney midway in my throat

amazing could be the word

seeing the one kept me afloat.


A meticulous  attempt it be

beautiful  all through

an idea different it be

like to see it  done all through.


A thought of originality  goes into

one of being the creativity at best

would become a great effort unto

an expression of overwhelming zest.


The niceties expressed  all the more

keeps me aghast for a while

the execution calls for once more

as I watch it  all the while.


What a way for a kid to think ?

my ten year old girl creates

a Barbie cake highlighting the blink

the caricature itself elevates.


She made the cake for her birthday

a wish she  cherished for long

a precursor to many accomplishments  in days

being my encomium  in this song.













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