A painstaking write
could be right
but would be stressed
as it is pressed
not once but times more
could be done in four
the repeated scrutiny
would turn the destiny
either for the good
as in most brood
else for the bad
become a fad
taught and thought
could be a sort
heavily loaded
very well shouldered
yet lacks the spontaneous
left as a thesis laborious.
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