A Painstaking Write.


A painstaking write

could be right

but  would be stressed

as it is pressed

not once but times more

could be done in four

the repeated scrutiny

would turn the destiny

either for the good

as in most brood

else for the bad

become a fad

taught and thought

could be a sort

heavily loaded

very well shouldered

yet lacks the spontaneous

left  as a thesis  laborious.

 

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