There being workshops all around
not only for mechanical
repairing the parts of machine
there be also workshops for poems
that revise the words
redo the verse
alter the lines
bring in imagery
the original gets lost in the round.
There being workshops all around
not only for mechanical
repairing the parts of machine
there be also workshops for poems
that revise the words
redo the verse
alter the lines
bring in imagery
the original gets lost in the round.
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Sometimes too much editing produces something quite different from the original.